Comics Never End

[thepenmonster]

You're unlikely to have an editor. And you're just as unlikely to have patient folks in your life who know enough about art to help you pin down what isn't working. But if you do, use them.

This is a small thing that a reader probably won't notice, but you can't rely on that.

Comments

[motodraconis]

The composition on take 2 is much more visually satisfying, (centering the character on the star, and dropping it down so the shape and composition can be seen.) Nice!

[thepenmonster]

Thanks.